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by griffonsperch

person Krucksue
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I definitely enjoy reading the story. Please continue. I'd like to see Sev "punish" Draco and Harry at the same time because Draco is too lenient.
person britbrit
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story,
i love sub harry!
keep it coming
schedule June 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i think it flows pretty smoothly and spanking is pretty generic for a D/s relationship. They're all still figuring out how to make this work so experimentation and mess ups are going to happen.
schedule June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that's how a relationship should be, especially one with D/s elements.
Dom's are supposed to push a sub, to help him/her grow but they're also supposed to protect a sub. To be safe shelter for their sub.
The trio's relationship doesn't seems strictly D/s but if it works for them, who cares. As long as they're all getting what they need out of it. Experimentation and finding each others hot spots, triggers and lines that can't be crossed is all part of it and they sound like their having fun. It's a pity har's friends aren't understanding but Meh to them. Hopefully Sev and Draco make up for that a little.
person SoulMore
schedule June 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
FAN!~
schedule October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. I eagerly await what you want to share with us next I'm writing this review as chapter 6 is done. A flashback to how he wound up putting his trust in Draco and Severus would be nice eventually.

I like your interpretation of how Harry's abuse form the Dursleys, everyone's insistence he had to go back each year, and people who supposedly cared for him pulling away from him affected him. Ron is really not much of a friend, how many times did he abandon Harry? It would be nice if at least a couple of his friends like Luna and Dean could accept his new lifestyle.

You really got me ramped up on this story lol, I usually don't have so much to say in a review lol.
person Louise
schedule August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just found Reluctaant Slut via a links from a rec page and then found Why I Submit. I really enjoyed both of these stories. D/s is a kink that I enjoy reading. I hope you will post more in these stories in the future or maybe something else. Thank you
schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thats pretty ambitious, 2 chaps a week. Don't beat yourself up is you don't manage it neh?
person Orkchild
schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, we will feed the muse but I'm all out of Purina muse chow so what does your muse like? All right wonderful installment I can hardly wait for more.
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was fantastic, more please