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for Valentine\'s Day Blues

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

schedule March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Like this alot.
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
funny, but no sex scene so waste of time, sorry
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM

This was a very cute oneshot. Crafty Lucius with no expense spared to herd Hermione into his arms. He was taking a chance that Snape might have been interested, but Lucius got lucky - I think in more ways than one. Great job, M!
person Ithilwen
schedule September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This should have more than one chapter!!
person Amy
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a well written story and I know I know it's fan FICTION but this would have been much more believable if it had been anybody BUT Lucius. Just my opinion. Still a great story though!
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do like this story. There are machinations, but there are not over the top or absurd, and her Valentine experiences and not pleasant, but not beyond awful either. The bit about Harry and Ginny breaking up and getting back together 5 hours later is a nice detail, as is Harry's reasoning. I also like that they drink for 2 hours before Lucius confesses. Lucius's avid interest in her bra size was quite funny.
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh that's funny! Just the image of a black-clad Snape waving red panties like a battle flag had me rolling!
person Jennifer
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a very cute, sweet little ficlet. I thought the idea of Lucius sending all the single men in Hermione's life panties was hilarious.
person katiekrm
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was funny. I especially liked Remus's response. "As much as I respect you..." lol Man, I would have had fun with that. She could have gotten into bed with Charlie and then said to every man, "We were hoping you would join us. lol But I like Lucius's way of thinking. It's nice to know you're wanted.
person Gilly_sirl
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a cute little story! Very good!