AFF Fiction Portal
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! lol Ah, if only...
person Dixie50
schedule July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for reviewing my story about Snape and Narcissa. Your comments were very helpful and appreciated.
I enjoyed this one very much. The dialogue was amusing and the ending was a zinger.
person blue artemis
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cute, what happened to Narcissa.
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The thought of Snape on a beach, in swimming trunks... with Lucius parading next to him makes me grin like a very mad thing.

I love how Snape's reluctance slowly melts away, and of course his petty towel moving *giggle*

Very entertaining, my only gripe is that it wasn't long enough ;)
person pittwitch
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Most excellent vignette! Wahini, water, and what else? LOL
person Marbil
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
In spite of the compulsion to top one another, they do care about each other. It's a word I usually consider blasphemy when referring to either one of them, but this was 'sweet'. Do you have any intentions of following up with their explorations in the grass.

Trickie
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* Oh, this was funny, and the bit with the towels was genius.
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Pity JK couldn't let us have a few scenes like that, but it was a children's series, after all. So, will Severus meet some snarky little kahuna with a taste for fattening up very pale english potions masters?