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for Over Protective Mates

by yamiyugi23

schedule April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i think i hate you for that ending (not really!) i look forward to the next post!
schedule April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love H/R/S fics ^^
Your spelling is perfect, but there are a few grammar mistakes, nothing major though. And the chapters are a little short, but otherwise this is a really good fic.
I cant wait to read the rest, so update soon please.
xXx
schedule April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cute! I would definitely like to see more of this story...but I think sirius suits better as super seme, don't you? Anyway, foxy Harry is so cute!! Hope they have some lemony fun soon!!
person sanda
schedule April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good story
schedule April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Will this story be mpreg? I'm just curious as they are my favorite kinds of stories. Anyway, nice chapter! :)
schedule April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aww, fluffy ending...i llok forward to more!
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
interesting story :) love remus and sirius! i look forward to the next update!

p.s. flames are also good for roasting marshmallows...
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Can't wait for more!
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
interesting i can't wait to see how it progress....and i wonder what the carnage will be to those pricks that house harry....good job