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for Over Protective Mates

by yamiyugi23

person Amu
schedule August 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Three at once? That's a lot =)
But just imagine little cat and dog like children...*.*
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Such yummy awesomeness xD
person sanda
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ya did good :) sorry to see it end :(
person sanda
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, cool ending
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww, this is really cute.
FoxHarry is so adorable.
I think you needed a beta for the last few chapters. The spelling wasn't too bad, but your grammar needs some work. And it could do with more detail and a little more plot (although that isn't necessary)
Really good job though, very imaginative. I cant wait to read your future fics.
xXx
schedule April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you really do enjoy tormenting us with cliffhangers...i look forward to the next (and last) chapter!
person sanda
schedule April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
schedule April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
do you live to torment us with cliffhangers? i look forward to the next update!
schedule April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like your story! It is a good start and I am really interested in seeing how this turns out. Keep up the good work! :)