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December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like this little one shot.
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February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice first story, and I definitely like it being MPreg.
Needs proofreading for spelling, grammar and typos. There are always betas over at the forum.
Rather big clump of paragraph.
Other than that, simple but sweet story.
Cheers~
Needs proofreading for spelling, grammar and typos. There are always betas over at the forum.
Rather big clump of paragraph.
Other than that, simple but sweet story.
Cheers~
schedule
January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
arr thats so sweet, im pregnant and love the feel of baby moving.
and two they will get a handfull and they may take like the weasley twins, seeing as one of their idols were harrys dad.
and two they will get a handfull and they may take like the weasley twins, seeing as one of their idols were harrys dad.
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January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awwww that was so cute ! i loved it
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January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please add more ! i would love to read more of this story . its a fantastic start and it would be a shame if it we didnt find out what they are having or more of their back story ?
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January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hiya tribalwolves here again,
i have just started writing the info for quiet moments and
you might get a short prequel soon.
if you like it so much i will probaly get round to a sequel.
but im not a great writer as u can see
as i never really studied english very well
and i would like to find a beta reader.
thanks for reviewing
keep leaving for coments
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Tribalwolves xx
i have just started writing the info for quiet moments and
you might get a short prequel soon.
if you like it so much i will probaly get round to a sequel.
but im not a great writer as u can see
as i never really studied english very well
and i would like to find a beta reader.
thanks for reviewing
keep leaving for coments
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Tribalwolves xx
schedule
January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute... I loved it... Is there more or is that it
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January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hi Tribalwolves here, i havent desided if i want to write more as this was my first story and it took ages to write Quiet moments. But i might try a prequel or maybe a sequel i havent desided but if theres enough people that want me to then maybe.
Thanks for reading and i would love to hear more.
Tribalwolves
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Thanks for reading and i would love to hear more.
Tribalwolves
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schedule
January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There were a few grammer errors but that's an easy fix. To me it sounded like English isn't ur 1st language. If it is I'm sorry. But like I said it's an easy fix. Just find a beta or what I do after I'm done typing I wait 3 days then read it over and by then most of the mistakes will be obvious. Other then that the story was cute and cuddly.