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by hunnybunny

schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmm, rather interesting story. this actually seems like something that voldemort would come up with. i look forward to reading more.
person klixxxi
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it!
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. Loved, but poor Harry... Oh wow...
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was hot! I love evil!Voldemort abusing poor!Harry, especially when Harry is forced to like it! Fantastic start, I can't wait to read more of this story!
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was sooo sad. Poor Harry... Voldemort really doesn't make it easy on him. Loved it!
person saeadame
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmm... I would appreciate you making paragraphs instead of just having a wall of text. I can't really read your story because it's just this huge single block....
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is pretty well written and enjoyable. It would be an easier
read I'd you made sure not to put it all in one paragraph. Keep up
the good work.
person saeadame
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome =D. Thanks for fixing the formatting ;P.

I have to say I'm a sucker for Slave!Harry fics, so this is great. I do like the ones where Harry starts to like/love Voldemort and Voldemort, while still pretty evil, appreciates the loyalty and starts to become a little nicer (actually, in the particular fic I'm thinking of, it was Master!Lucius/Slave!Harry, not Voldemort, so a bit different...).

I don't know if that's the direction you're going, or if you want to eventually have Harry somehow overthrow Voldemort and save everyone or something, but I can't wait to find out!

... and if this is going to be a sad ending instead (ie - Harry dies) could you tell me now so I can stop reading? lol. Just kidding. Sort of. I hate fics where Harry dies ;_;. I frankly could care less about almost everyone else, but Harry dying makes me depressed.

Hope for an update soon!
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, poor Harry, he offers up so much and then all of his friends get tortured anyway... Love it!