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June 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely adore this rewrite of the Mauraders background. Yea for long chapters too! The story structure and flow is superb. I especially like the caring family setup for Remus and the extremely believable Jonn and his character. I appreciate the comprehensive visual development. Severus and his eventual split with Remus is closely tied to cannon but really more logical and believable to me. This seems to be in hiatus due to the years since it was written but it can stand alone anyway. Now on to the sequel, I'm extremely curious to see how that turns out, and if Severus plays a role, how you write him.
Oh yes, you are my favorite type of author because you write long chapters of well built, grammatical, fast paced stories with a great mix of humor and darkness.
Oh yes, you are my favorite type of author because you write long chapters of well built, grammatical, fast paced stories with a great mix of humor and darkness.
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January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I fucking love this fic the bit about learning about Cuddles made me freaking cry if this doesn't continue it will be a shame!!! Please update this and your other stories!!!!!!
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November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i would love to read more of this story & i really hope you haven't abandoned it!
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
its REALLY good.
i loved the plot progression detail !
and how it links to your other story salvation, also its good to read about sirius and remus
the only bad thing is that the suspense is killing me ... :'(
i loved the plot progression detail !
and how it links to your other story salvation, also its good to read about sirius and remus
the only bad thing is that the suspense is killing me ... :'(
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November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was fantastic! It was incredibly long and oh so well written! :D
I loved it, especially those twins XD. I can't really explain, but know that I love it. Remus and Sirius are both perfect.
The only thing might be that it was awfully long for a one-shot. It might've benefitted from being posted in 2 or 3 parts instead, not for the sake of the sstory, but for the reader.
I loved it, especially those twins XD. I can't really explain, but know that I love it. Remus and Sirius are both perfect.
The only thing might be that it was awfully long for a one-shot. It might've benefitted from being posted in 2 or 3 parts instead, not for the sake of the sstory, but for the reader.
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November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely brilliant. I loved how you had Remus grow up and how you took the time to let us get a feel for who they all were. I'll admit, I was a bit uneasy when I first started reading because I wasn't quite sure what you were doing but by the end I was in love. =) This is one of the best Marauder's fics I've read and I'm really happy you posted it. Thank you for this lovely read. Made my day.