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for Misplaced Trust

by MysticWitchRini

schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I've just read your story and I am fully caught up to the newest updated chapter. Let me just say that I am fully interested and I love the plot that you have woven so far. Some of the couples such as Bellatrix/Harry, I didn't expect to like at all. However, you made me like it. It's the same way with Tom and Ginny. Your chapters are hot!!!!!! Great scenes and plenty of fun. I love what you have written, and you have a found a new reader in me. Excellent work!
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
if ginny gets to watch do we get to read, lol enways it did take u a while to update this time but i understand the whole job thing n school hope it get easier can't wait for the next

Much Luv
Babymomma
person knm
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hiya, just found your story--love it so far!

None of these are my normal pairings...but I think you two have made them work. Now Ginny's in the house, maybe she and Hermione can play??

Or--Harry and Sirius. Dunno why I want them so bad though. LOL
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh MY GOD this just gets beter and better and i love the names for harry and bela babies their wonderful names and ginny finally arrived i was wondering about that so is she going to get it on with voldemort. that would just be the cherry on top.

Much Luv
Babymomma
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow this chapter was amazing and can't wait for the next chapter and if you're next story is half as good as this one I'll be sure to read it and i'ma start reveiwing more often it would be ashame to abandon such good stories cause no one reveiws

Much Luv
Babymomma
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have been away so here is my review of the last couple of chapters...I am glad that Harry saw the Bella for her true nature not Dumbledore's way

Loved the little menage trois scene xx

Its great to see that the Malfoys had another kid...bonding moments please xx

Sev has someone now....please add more soon xx
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story it amazing and i can't wait for the next chapter i check everyday to see if the next ones up but never reviewed a story this good got 2 be reviewed though why people aren't reveiwing is beyond me but well i shouldn't be talking cause this is the first time i reveiw this story so yea enways i love it and can't wait for the next chapter

much luv

Babymomma
person moar
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why yes, yes I am :D
Very hot chapter, also very cute. And pool old Voldy, pining over someone he can't have.
Gah! It's been months since I've used a strap on, this story really makes me want to :(
Keep up the good work hun!
person moar
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad Harry got his head sorted out and didn't go nutso at Bella. And yay for Bella's wandering fingers!! I love slipping my fingers in during a blowjob. One of the hottest times was when I was having a shower with my boyfriend and I was sucking him off while fingering myself. Then I just used my juiced up fingers on his ass. Blew his load almost right away. He dragged me back to be and thanked me for it in most wonderful ways.
Anyway...YAY for you and putting more of that kinda thing in. Hoping to see some more in the 'cumming' chapters. Oh and speaking of cumming...Harry's tongue + Bella's just fucked, cum filled pussy = hot. Just saying ;)
Oh and I managed to get my friend writing. It should be up sometime soon. I'll let you know when :D
person jeff
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
glad you did not leave Harry under Dumble control for very long