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for Oh...No Bloody Idea!

by SickPuppy

person delia cerrano
schedule September 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Amusing.  Certainly unique plot.

person CatGotMyHeart88
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was very funny I wonder if they have any lingering feelings over draco because despite being a jerk he is pretty good in the sack.
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved that! I wish you'd continue!!! How do the children react to the truth? What house are they sorted into?
person SP777
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know about anybody else, but that was entertaining...justice IS sweet. :-)
person Rumi
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked this a lot and it cheered me up some too - been having a bad night. My proposal for a title would either be: 'Fredrick Potter and Malfoy's Shoulder' or 'Fredrick Potter and the Potter Affair.' Also, good use of the promt's dialogue.
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I kind of like the title to the story. It's part fairy tale, part morality tale, part porn with some plot, and part crazy.

Very good job with the challenge and with your use of imagery, the repetition of the scenes between Malfoy with Harry and Ginny, and the green and silver watch.

Whoo Hooo. Now all we have to do is wait for A's answer to our challenges.

person Black Padfoot
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow... well ok, the constant switching between times was a little bit confusing but I like the general idea of this story... interested to see the rest of it now... =)