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for Mystery of You

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

person KellyJCR
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Must have more! I have to many questions that need answers. A sheild that appears as needed , esp, telekenesis what is it exactly that she has? Severus...what was his abilities when they appeared? Lucius, does he have exactly what Hermione has and again, what is it? I can go on but I'll cut you some slack. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!
person VoraciousReader
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That is an interesting developement, I must say! I wish that chapter had been longer, my curiosity is killing me, damn it.
person Robs
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, interesting story so far. I like. I wonder how Lucius is going to fit into all this??? Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Strange but good!!! Very good!!! Keep them coming...
person Sorcha
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhh... I do love a mystery, what is going on with Hermione? Can't wait for more!
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant first chapter! You have me hooked!

I love the story concept of Hermione having inherited some sort of additional magical abilities--too cool!

Well written--keep up the good work!

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schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
most interesting...love the line about Pansy.
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start can't wait to see where its going.
person Rainie
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok now that I am hooked I hope to read some more soon. Thanks and sorry about your teeth my dentisit messed up a root canal and after 3 months and 4 specialist visits later I am fixed but scared of the dentist. Thank you for this story and can;t wait to see what and how this plays out. Happy writing.