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for Mystery of You

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope the mystery of her powers will be reveal soon.. But Lucius Malfoy as a trainer.. My oh my this is getting better by the minute...
person VoraciousReader
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have always wanted to have the power to remove idiots from my vicinity when I'm reading--I hate interruptions! LOL, love it.
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter two

Wow, that was a pretty realistic vision of past events that Hermione had experienced. It is no wonder that she was beginning to wonder about her sanity.

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schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm - I'm still at a loss about the mystery, damn it! Lucius sounds YUMMILICIOUS! I want one, frozen on a stick, please! *hand money over for her Lucius-pop* :-)
person Tenar10r
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Boy I wish I'd had that power in the library in school!
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, the whole idea about having one or several aditional power(s) and Hermione coming into this inheritance is probably not completely original, but I like the idea anyway. The chapters are written in a very nice and believable way and it's a joy to read them.

I suppose Severus asked Lucius for help because he himself does have some kind of unusual magical talent? He was not very reluctant to help, I'd have expected he'd be more appalled at the idea to help a lowly Mudblood...

By the way, what is Severus' inheritance? Did I miss what it was or haven't you told us yet?

Great job, please keep posting at a regular interval! I'll sure continue to read!
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! It's so different!! Can NOT wait for more!!!!
person Sheep
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am reviewing in the hope that you will continue to post updates.
REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW!
It's very good, im really into it and theres only been 3 chappies. PLEASE CONTINUE POSTING!
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person ripewickedplum12
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm hooked. Keep up the good work, and please update ASAP!!!
person dragon88
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay Lucius :) lol I'm really liking this story so far, i like the idea of magical inheritance, bless hermione, I wonder how dear lucius intends to help her? hehe looking forward to reading more *thumbs up*