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for Mystery of You

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"You would be on your back with me balls deep in your sweet cunt.
person Robs
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear Lucius....you've done it now. LOL at Severus using Molly as a threat. I like your headmaster Severus. He's a good, level-headed kinda guy. Lucius has been celibate for too long, me thinks. Look forward to the next chapter!
person Snakekat
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I love that they all want Hermione and that Lucius is only mortal. write faster please
person dragon88
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear bad lucius! lol good chapter, very amusing! I like the way Snape is portrayed in this bless him being all protective of Hermione :P
Please update soon, more please!!
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol@severus setting Molly onto Lucius. That woman would induce fear in most hotblooded men. Love the update, Lucius is his normal self which I love. Can't wait till the next update its a really good story so far :-D
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapter...can't wait for more
person katiekrm
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so funny. Giving Lucius over to Molly Weasley. I'd pay to see that.
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.Well written and funny as hell..Hold it, why is hell funny?Can't wait for more chappies.
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is getting more interesting please keep going i love it.
person VoraciousReader
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is she going to keep her sanity long enough to gain a measure of control? or at least can her shield knock Draco in the pool or something for being a nasty little ferret? Ooh, can she give him a ferret head? That would be good--I can see him as a nicely dressed little member of the Mustelidae!