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for Mystery of You

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Queen=Somebody to love...now give me a cookie!Lol.Wow,Lucius is treating Hermione as if they are together and he thinks he's the boss.Poor Lucius he has no idea who Hermione is.Can't wait for next chappy.
person katiekrm
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why you do you have to say it's easy and make me feel like a dumbass? That's okay. I already cheated and looked at someone else's answer :-) This was my favorite chapter so far! I love this line:
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
definatly an unfair ending point /pout
and somebody to love is the song
person Kim
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Somebody to love by Queen, and as for a review, I love your story. Your characters are well written and I can "see" the action happening. Two thumbs up!!!!

Kim
person smmz79
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chap i am very interested in this inheritance that draco has come into and i love that hermione stands up to lucius
person Jade
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is crazy and funny.. keep them coming.
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
1. It's a Queen song and somehow the name is escaping me at the moment.

2. This is quite an intriguing story. I'm thoroughly hooked. I hope for more updates soon. I'd like to know exactly where this is going. Its so hard to actually tell.

xoxo
dM
person katiekrm
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All I can think of is the Tequila song that PeeWee Herman would dance to, but I don't remember anything except the tequila part. ha, ha No joke meant, though. Want to hear my made up song I sing to my cat who protects me from spiders? Of course you do! "Spider Kitty, Spider Kitty, if anyone can catch spiders, it's Spider Kitty. Swings her claws, won't mince words, catches spiders like mice and birds. Look out! Here comes the Spider Kitty!" You know, I think there just might be a little bit more of a hint as to what my song is based on than what yours is! So here's my idea for your story. :-) Since Hermione has special powers and Draco and Snape do too, why not make them like The Incredibles! They can have the masks and suits and everything! Just a suggestion. And she can do shields just like Violet. I'm just saying. I love how domestic Lucius and Hermione have become. And I love that Draco and Harry are together!
person VoraciousReader
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is Draco a firedrake? A phoenix-human crossbreed? A salamander? Loved the lves whining!