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for Mystery of You

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

person severely disgusted
schedule January 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMFG you totally stole the powers and such from JR Ward's Black Dagger Brotherhood series.. for shame as I know for a fact the author hates people using her stuff!
person M.A. Silverwolf
schedule April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The song "Beauty and the Beast" was also published (at least to schools) under the name "Tale as Old as Time: Beauty and the Beast". My eigth grade school choir had sheet music for it under that name. I guess it would be sorta like Three Days Grace's Everything about You. The CD jacket says that's its name, but everybody I know--including wikipedia and various lyric sites--adds "I Hate" before it. Great story so far. I'm eager to reach the end, so that's just what I'll do. Blessed Be!
person Qt
schedule October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. I have seriously come back to read it at least 10+ times. As always wonderful work. :)
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(chapter four) dah dah dah dah! Lucius to the rescue! I wonder how he will make this turn to his advantage?
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter six "You would be on your back with me balls deep in your sweet cunt.
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter ten- It's about time Harry started writing her. What a prat! I wonder what Draco's inheritance is? Must be drastic for Lucius to order Hermione out.
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter fourteen- Hot hot hot!
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter seventeen G & R Live and Let Die
one if my fave bands before Axle screwed it all up. As to the story I see Lucius is trying to heal others. Very good. That has much more lasting affects than money. Shame on Seamus for calling Hermione such names.
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, right, so like I said before. Very, very, very good story, but felt like I was watching a movie in fast-forward. There were these tiny gaps where you would introduce things without explanation, but you seemed to leave enough contextual info for me to keep up. If you were to write a professional book, I'm sure it would be considered the start of a new style. IF people understand it. Anyhow, I loved this story. I read it in like... three days. It would have been much less if I wasn't reading it when i was distracted from my other work anyway. lol... thank you very much!
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm only on chapter 13, but I'm enjoying this. The problem is that I can't get past the feeling that this story is passing as though in fast-forward. The character development seems a bit rushed. But like I said, I love the plot. Very good!