rate_review Reviews

I'm sorry about your foot and hope that it is doing much better. I hope you haven't changed your mind about finishing this story. I find it very interesting so far.

i just stumbled upon your story and i like the base of it but i am wondering if u are coming back to it any time soon?

Please continue!

that was a great start ... please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

Hello

I really liked your first chapter. I hope your foot gets better soon and I'll be looking for chap. 2. :>

OMG! I hope and pray that you are better soon. At least you don't have to worry about health insurance where you're at. I hope you don't anyway. As for being dyslexic, I understand. I myself am learning disabled and have to come up with multiple ways to get by. One of the issues I have is that I can't really see my mistakes. I know a lot of people have this. But I found a solution of sorts. I have my computer read my writing to me that way I can hear the mistakes. It's amazing. I love my computer all the more because of this. That and spell check. I thank god everyday for that. I wouldn't be able to function without it. And seeing as I am a writer that would be bad. Take care of yourself. Your health comes first. I hope you're better soon.

WOW!!!! Can't wait for the next update.

Good luck and I hope your foot heals quickly.

This story and plot line seems very interesting. But the grammar and spelling makes it difficult to read.

I mean capitalization is very important, commas, spelling, etc...

Best of luck.