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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok I read them all and am now reviewing great story so far. I REALLY recommend either a beta or spell check. Mis-spelled words and no punctuation will kill a story and reviews.
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the bottom!Draco warning right at the beginning. I wish all authors would put it there, taking into account the personal preference of the readers, so I wouldn't get into a story then get turned off it. Anyways, thanks again.
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry you don't wear big girl panties and can't take constructive criticism. The chapter was good. Just thought you would want more positive reviews from people that would read. I will try not to make you cringe with further reviews
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 5!
yay! they made up! yay draco isn't going to poison harry! i hope narcissa die's! GREAT CHAPTER! I LOVE IT! THIS STORY IS BLOODY AMAZING! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'M BEGGING U ON MY HANDS AND KNEES TO MAKE MORE CHAPTERS! (pwetty pwetty pwetty please?????) I'LL BE WAITING VERY VERY VERY LONGINGLY! PLEASE DON'T KEEP ME IN SUSPENCE LONG!
yay! they made up! yay draco isn't going to poison harry! i hope narcissa die's! GREAT CHAPTER! I LOVE IT! THIS STORY IS BLOODY AMAZING! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'M BEGGING U ON MY HANDS AND KNEES TO MAKE MORE CHAPTERS! (pwetty pwetty pwetty please?????) I'LL BE WAITING VERY VERY VERY LONGINGLY! PLEASE DON'T KEEP ME IN SUSPENCE LONG!
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
how sweet.... finally harry's starting to come around.
thanks for updating so quickly. cant wait to see what happens next. so glad that draco didnt decide to poison harry. Looking forward to the next chapter! : )
thanks for updating so quickly. cant wait to see what happens next. so glad that draco didnt decide to poison harry. Looking forward to the next chapter! : )
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok Narcissa seriously needs to be put down like the dog she is.
And we can send Voldemort down to the deepest part of hell....
Can't wait for the next chapter...
And we can send Voldemort down to the deepest part of hell....
Can't wait for the next chapter...
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love protective Harry and sweet Draco. Loving your story.
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like this. gimme chapter 6 and i'll make a few corrections. i can handle it today :)
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH! I hope nothing bad happens to draco. Update soon please!
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 1!
awe draco's so cute! hm are u going to make draco pregnant sometime in this story? i hope so! GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! I CAN TELL THAT I WILL REALLY ENJOY THIS STORY MORE THAN I ALREADY AM! THIS STORY IS ALREADY FANTASTIC!
awe draco's so cute! hm are u going to make draco pregnant sometime in this story? i hope so! GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! I CAN TELL THAT I WILL REALLY ENJOY THIS STORY MORE THAN I ALREADY AM! THIS STORY IS ALREADY FANTASTIC!