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person jubilant
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha such a saucy thing Hermione! Amazing story so far
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Draco jumped up and down and clapped his hands. Draco put his cheek on her shoulder again briefly before he skipped to Hermione's side."

I swear, all the character's are on a potion....this comedy of errors gets funnier and funnier. For the first time, I was annoyed at Hermione in this chapter. She is being somewhat unjust in not giving our silly boy a chance. She seems to like a bit of darkness and the behaviour of older men. I think it's why she like Sev and find Lucius attractive. Someone needs to break the news that Sev is gay by the way.

PS: please don't hold your fic hostage for reviews....that's not very fair to your faithful readers.
person mlui
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
8: Hmm, I wonder where Draco's Flooing to? Severus? The Ministry of Magic? Someone else? Ah, there goes the misunderstanding of wizarding/Muggle customs. I liked the conversation between Draco and Hermione, and exchanging stuffed animals is cute!! Sometimes, I think Draco pouts too often...I guess that's supposed to go with his childish characteristics? I really thought Draco would tell Hermione that Severus is gay before his parents... what's this letter from the Ministry of Magic?? I would assume that she's free to do things to Draco without outside interference. Plus, she just threw tea on him...I dunno, that just equates to me a slap in the face. I hope she's not /tracked/ by the Ministry...great chapter!! =)
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG - I want to smack Hermione....I love Draco's OCC insane childish snort-obssessed character...just like a cool drink of lemonade on a damn hot day. AAAAAHHHHH!

Thanks for clearing up the issue of the chapter...so glad you are planning on posting regularly. :-)
person ratsy
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed this story so far even though it is silly to think of a grown malfoy in this way it is still funny.
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story so far. I normally don't like spoiled brat Draco, I tend to prefer Bad boy/Bad ass Draco. BUT this is hilarious. =] I don't mind Hermione's OOC-ness because it works for the plot. Another thing- I love the hint to Lupin/Snape and Ron/Harry. If you can I would like to see more from both these pairings in this fic soon. ;P If you can. Too bad there won't be any Lucious/Hermione moments, because I love the way you write him. -pouts- Oh well. I can't wait to read what you write next. Raven.
person Coipje
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can I be the first in line please pretty please :D
Draco is such a child how adorable :D
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Feeding the muse.
I think this is a very creative story and would like to see it continued.
i loved the stuffed animals and thought it was a very cute way for them to interact.
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Maybe and just maybe Hermione needs a little of a shock encountering Severus with Remus perhaps... a little crying and Draco to the rescue lol
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hermione is really stubborn! just like draco i was also led on to believe that she is now ready to give him a chance. But she threw everything in his face in the morning! Poor Draco! I thought she already understood him! How could she be so callous to him after all the intimate secrets they shared during the night?

Well this is a BIG BIG challenge to Draco! It's like the taming of the shrew! The title says it all right! When Malfoy wants a witch he would do do anything to get her come hell or high water!

I am so excited so please update soon!

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