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person Draco's LOVER
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! So cute. I like Snort and Jezebel. Childish but cute. Am so excited to see where this is going. Please update soon. I hope Draco and Hermione can learn to be nice soon.
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
geez, I LOVE this meerry-go-round....I need to buy another ticket cause I don't want to get off.

I felt sorry for Sev for thinking he would lose a female friend because he's gay....that made me very sad. I would also assume the Luc and Narcissa know he's gay. I had to wonder if some of what Hermione said under the influence of that potion was true, some of it had to be - it couldn't all be a lie. I suspect she feels more than what she lets on and she does like snort!
person Anon
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a crap!
Author, go back in your kindergarden and play with your dolls.
person luna love
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The last few chapters were getting even more frustrating. Absolutely everyone works against Hermione and helps Draco. No idea why, for Draco's a childish caricature of himself. Potions again is just too much. I'm getting to a point now that I hope Draco never get's Hermione. Not a good thing for reading this ship. Others may love it, but I'm gone. Good luck though!
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If i were in draco's predicament, i might do the same thing! Drugging her seems better compared to the bitch he is confronted everytime he comes near her. It's a pity though that he has to resort to that method just to get her to be nice to him. im amaze that he is not taking so much advantage of her now that she is once more enamored to him.

i wish the boat would turn around. i am longing to see draco genuinely loved aready
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i started to read your reviews to see what other people thought i wanted too know if i was being dumb for not loving your story. most people loved it however i think it is very childish. Hermione says things that a little girl would say. i am waiting to see when she claims that Draco has cooties. Please don't think i just want to be mean. i have never left a writer a bad review. I hate getting them myself. the reason i felt that i had to leave a review is because i think that it could be a great story. it is funny and a good plot but the way they act i can't tell if they are adults or not. Being determined is one thing but they are just brats both of them. i have read every chapter hoping that it would change but.....please don't take this wrong i just needed to let you know.
person Panther Eyes
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well that tender moment was short lived. that this rate hermione will never give draco a real chance. is she ever going to find out that severus is gay n in love with remus... it might make the process go quicker for draco to get hermione to at least like him a little. just curious... how far along is hermione with this fake pregnancy? also when is the wedding that hermione is forced to have? is it far enough for hermione to prove that she was never pregnant n that draco was really a lying ferret?
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, I didn't have access to a computer for a few days. So I'm catching up now.... Let's see..
Chapter 7: I can't wait to find out The elder Malfoy's Story of courting his wife. It should be interesting.
Also, the toy dragon.. so cute, if a bit childish. But that was the point so... Well done.

And I still love the fast updating. COOKIES FOR YOU!
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8: Geeze.... Hermione really needs to make up her mind. Either decide to give him a chance and be somewhat civil or just be a bitch all the time...... When people go back and forth in real life it's just... bloody annoying, that's what it is.

I know she made an agreement but she went above and beyond... so.. BLEH...

Still, lovely update. I enjoy this story so much that you have been upgraded from cookies to cupcakes.

With little candy dragons and books on top. (To symbolize our loverly couple)

Can't wait for more!
person Lady Disdain
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The beginning of your story was very interesting, but I think Draco's attitude really goes over the top now., He really acts like a kid, and not in a good way. I also don't feel like the story is progressing in any way.