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hehehehe serves him right for drugging her! ;) well i wonder how she will feel in the morning? i bet you one reason is she is not a drinker, but maybe the potion is having ill effects because of the alchohol? well do update soon and let us know how things go!! :)

"Draco wiggled his fingers at his father."

That was hilarious...okay, this potion seems to be affecting her slightly differently. She seems to be part of herself but not....part of her realizes Sev is gay as well. I hope she wakes up!

10: LOL! Did she have too much to drink and that's why she went to sleep? Ah, poor Draco. Or has the potion expired? Ah, great chapter and I'm glad Lucius noticed her odd slight change/behaviour. Gosh, I can't believe Pansy is so delusional. And I wonder what the papers will say the next day. I can't wait for the next chapter! =)

Wow this chapter is very sweet! Draco is in heaven! It's good for Hermione to be drugged a little. Her real feelings for Draco shows. I think she feels antagonism towards Draco only because of a spell caused by Valdemort. That's why no matter what Draco does she hates him. Am i right?

Sorry bit I have to say that I find this Hermione Boring. She has no fire! no spark!
Like Lucius i want draco to have to work for it!

Bad timing but very funny!!!!!!.. Love it .. Please more more more.

thank god she fell asleep. i sure everyone will agree with that if draco did sleep with hermione it would had been a date rape. although i must admit that when draco thought that she fell asleep because he was boring was a little bit funny. please don't get hermione pregnant while she is druggged.

i also came to a couple of conclusions. first hermione knows deep down that her and severus will never happen. second she knows she attrached to draco but doesn't know if she loves him or else she would have said it while drugged (glad this potion doesn't make a lovesick idiot). and third... lucy is seriously pussy-whipped.

9: Though the potion's not as strong, it is still making her woozy. Her attention span is very limited...she was adament that she only take one dress, but then allowed Draco to take them all. I'm sure if anyone is was there, they'd immediately notice or file it away for later analysing. I do have a question - does she remember what happened during her potion induced actions after the potion wears off? It looks like she doesn't remember putting on the engagement ring or was she just shocked? Very nice chapter! =)

Now, deary, you know I love you and this story, and I'm hoping that you don't mind constructive criticism.

During the scene in the dressing room, I kind of felt like Draco and Hermione were switching from adult conversation to very childish interactions randomly. It threw me off balance a little bit. And I know, in general, that you have them both being written as more childish than you normally see written in adult fan fiction. On one hand it's funny but on the other I think it's getting in the way of the story a bit. These are mature, war-weathered adults. They don't have to be angsty but maybe acting a bit more like the adults they are supposed to be in the story.

On the back of that, I really do adore this story. Please keep writing and updating quickly as you usually do!
And enjoy your update cookies.

P.S. Would it be horrible of me to say I WANT MORE BLAISE?... Mostly just because I'm VERY partial to a jealous Draco and.. I can see soooo much happening there *smirk*

back to using a potion... i swear draco has a death sentence. mommy n daddy won't be happy when they find out. if they do would they be mad enough to call off the marriage n make draco get her on his own. it may be milder than the last potion but still pathetic. i will admit that hermione's behavior is mostly immature but you have to admit that she is within her rights to do so. just curious... is there a chance of what hermione confessed to draco that there was some truth in it? or is it the potion talking?