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person Panther Eyes
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another thing... i wouldn't be surprised that draco cummimg early was a punishment for being a lying manlipuative molesting ferret. LOL
person Citten
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
we are getting better behaivor out of the two but they still have thier moments. :) poor hermione she really is blocking it out, isn't she? boy you even have my lost and confused. :P draco needs to take some pages from his dad on the behavior list, hermione would respond better. and she seriously needs to take a chill pill! :) do update and soon please!!!
person mlui
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
11: Well, I guess Hermione's slowly overpowering the potion as she saw a flash of Severus and she didn't want Draco's touches...very nice chapter and Draco's embarassment is so adorable! I really laughed at Lucius when he tried to act all imposing, but it ended up failing. His assertion of 'appropriateness' is hilarious and embarassment of what should remain private between him and Narcissa sweet. =)
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like potion drugged Hermione, all the mushy, lovey stuff she's been saying and the possesive way she acts is hilarious. I like that you explained her anger as a side effect of magical pregnancy, I was wondering why she was acting so overly baserk. Although I think she went a little to far by saying she wished Lucius was the father. It's one thing to say that to Draco just to make him mad, but saying that in front of Narcissa, even though she didn't seem to mind, normally that would have created a little family tension.
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hermione is like a bouncing ball...my head hurts from all the jumping around her crazy emotions are doing...LMAO!

And Draco coming early was HILARIOUS. Draco needs to stop drugging her and just shag her senseless. LOL what a courtship.
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It started very sweet and romantic in the beginning then in the end it turned sour again. How much longer must Draco wait for Hermione to see the light? He must be getting impatient. I am too!

As usual the scene between Hermione and Draco is very funny...
person polka dot
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't like Hermoine all cloying and girly girl. It's time for her to smack Draco into a wall!
person Panther Eyes
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
just when i thought no more drama could be added to the mix. that is some strong pregnancy spell draco put on hermione that it could fool the healer. atleast they didn't have sex or else hermione would possibly be pregnant by now which would had been a product of rape (you have to agree with me on that one). i'm a little worried about these potions actually messing up hermione's brain; which also brings me to something i forgot to commit on the last chapter... did moldy-butt put a spell on hermione to make her hate draco? and honestly did lucy forget that he was young once? behaved like a gentleman my arse.
person polka dot
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is very funny. Draco is a snake and Lucius is the good guy. Too insane.
person Shayde
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
In my opinion this is the stupidest fic I have ever read. I'm sorry but really who would believe Draco over Hermione. Now just because I think this is stupid doesn't mean I think your writing is stupid every thing flows really well and there is an easy rhythm to your writing that makes it easy to read.