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person mlui
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
6: Gotta love Lucius!! Duping her with potions is never going to work. Although if it'd worked, he could have made the pregnancy look legitimate. Great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next. Though Draco might want to straighten his spine a bit... I know he's in love with her, but I hope he shows more of his self to her when trying to win her and not attempt to devious tricks. Those never help build a relationship, which needs trust. I hope he'll learn that soon... =)
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving your story please write more!
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Darkly funny is good.
Oh noo! Not a quadrangle of dooooom! It's strange that Hermione can't remember anything from the potion...

Thanks for updating

person Coipje
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it
and why did you copy my reviews ?
doesn't matter indeed I think Lucius is a handsome man
Jason Isaacs is wonderful actor who plays him and very delicious :D
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the last part... very clever with the potion... Hey keep them coming...
person wudelfin
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
severus betrayed her and now remus knows that should have some repercussions. herimone's reaction to both draco and her one love
person Panther Eyes
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok... first off; princess if orlando bloom **sigh** did that to me i would still inflict pain on him for causing me such misery no matter how cute he is. of course orlando wouldn't have to take such measures since i would gladly marry him and have his baby. orlando **sigh**

second... nasty boils on the crotch is a nice touch.

third... lucy(my nickname for lucius cuz it's funny) knows that draco lied about hermione being pregnant or did i misunderstand that?

fourth... thank god the potion finally wear out. hermione wouldn't be hermione without her stubborness. also would draco honestly be happy knowing that hermione would only love him due to a potion? i mean that would be pathetic and make him less of a man for not earning her love; which at this rate will never happen.
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was hilarious...again, great fast-paced dialogue. love childish, petulant Draco and his pure adoration of his crazy drugged up witch. and when she comes off her high, that was too funny. they are both so silly and crazy that they deserve each other. LOL.

can't wait for dark, LOVE dark Draco
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love authors what update quickly.. COOKIES FOR YOU!

Thanks for making me laugh, I look forward to the updates.
person Emmy
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wanna know how they faked the preggers test!!!