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for Abandoned Child

by Dreamer27

person Mordred
schedule January 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Why do you have this symbol� instead of an apostrophe? Its makes your story harder to read then putting the correct punctuation mark.

person taya
schedule September 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm confused if Harry/Lucas finished number 1 in his grade then why does he need lessons to catch up with the others. He would be ahead of them wouldn't he? Also when did Rosier and Lucas meet? If he's as alone as you describe he'd be clinging to that relationship before the party and not even know who Rosier is at the party. I read it because it seems to have a lot of potential but I'm really confused. Also while I can understand Dumbledore not knowing about the lightning bolt scar oh Lucas' shoulder how does Lily not notice unless she's the most unobservant mother ever.
schedule July 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
poor Harry. Hope you finish it one day
person cherokee
schedule June 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
please make the next chapter
person jl
schedule March 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this!!!Its awesome!!!
person Allie Boucher
schedule October 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
If you ever update please email me. I love your stories!!
schedule August 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
person jami_lee
schedule June 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love, Love , love this story!!!! Can't wait to read more!! I hope that you finish it one day!!!
person j
schedule April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like the story in general, it has promise. However, you are a terrible writer.
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this thus far. Thanks for sharing!