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January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! i look forward to seeing how you develop it!!
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March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
interesting start, look forward to seeing where you go with it. hope you get back to working on it soon. keep up the good work :)
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August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whats Riven? You didn't expain it.
LIke how the storys going update at some piont.
LIke how the storys going update at some piont.
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December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
^^ this is very interesting. Usually it's a magical creature explanation- magical genetic disorder isnt something i've seen before. ^^ I hope you update this soon; i'm curious to see what the treatment is, and what other symptoms there are, if any :)
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting start I'd enjoy seeing where you take us...so please update.. or atleast post an addendum that says abandoned.
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is very good and I'd love to see more.
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now this is a great chapter!!!!! can't wait for more
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you really should continue with this, it has a lot of potential!
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting start, though you might want to spellcheck. BTW, it's 'Blaise Zabini'. There's no 'm' in his last name.
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I would like to know what connection Ron has with Dumbles. And for Riven to be an uncommon genetic disorder, how is it that Draco just happened to know the spell and cast it on Harry to check him out, just because his family is one of the few that know of the spell does not provide information as to why Lucius deemed it important enough to inform Draco of this, unless the Malfoy's are plagued with this genetic abnormality as well.