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by Abrymurdock

person Shellnet
schedule May 25, 2019 at 12:00 AM

 Great story but it’s Ben 10 years so you probably graduated and abandoned it

schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so very sorry to hear about the butchering of your work, i myself do very much enjoy your story as i am in a sub/dom relationship, i always find it exciting to see peoples views and takes on the lifestyle. the both of us are looking forward to more from your creative hands
keep up the good work, i'm pulling for you we're all in this together.
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I really look forward to you continuing this!
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Abry, we all read and write in the hopes of improving our technique. I for one, was enjoying it and had been waiting for your next posting. I find it interesting to read a new author, even with spelling errors. Yes, it's human. As for the plagiarist flamer, you can complain to the site's managers and see what they can do for you.
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You've been HOBFFed.
http://badfanfics.forumotion.co.uk/bad-fanfiction-just-discovered-f1/horrid-snermione-fic-with-linkin-park-and-potion-rape-nws-t300.htm
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, I am intrigued. Please write more!
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hot damn that was fantastic! i can't wait for more!
person amd2175
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving it, can't wait for more...esp because I want to know what the packages are...
person Carine
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was just so hot!I hope that Hermione will find a way to make Severus drink the same potion for men.
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. I can't wait to read more.