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by soldiersgirl0709

person smmz79
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aahhh poor remus.... hmm i wonder what is going through hermiones mind
person smmz79
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so i figured hermione would try to blame herself but wow i love remus in this he laid his head in her lap oh wow ok so maybe i could start reading more remus/hermione fics???
person smmz79
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ha ha that is so typical as if he could not feel worse!!!! ahh but it will work out i loved this chap....
person smmz79
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ummm yeah that was really hot loved it but i hope he talks to her soon
person smmz79
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg now that is so sweet he licked her fingers...
person smmz79
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow remus get your gead out of your furry little ass!!!!!
person smmz79
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that is definitely a twist to this story!!!! holy crap... i like that hermione and severus are friends... i do love severus.... anyway ohhh and the part about draco staring at himself in all reflective services was funny i had the picture in my head of him and hermione at dinner and him with his spoon or butter knife in his hand staring at his reflection and hermione glaring at him... that was good
person Steph
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That ending snuck up on me a bit. It feels like there is a big gap between chapters 11 and 12. I actually thought perhaps you posted the wrong document instead.

Muses come and go. You might find that in a week, or a month, or a year that you want to fill in the gaps. The first 11 chapters got me hooked, and I'd love to know what happened at least up untill Rhea's birth.

In the end, its your work, so if you are happy with it, then thats what counts.
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh goody! This was just perfect!!! I love Remus/Hermione, and this fluffy little story was absolutely perfect after "The Affair" which were a much "heavier" story. Yup, very nice indeed! I can agree upon Remus being a more difficult character to write, I admit that I prefer his wolfish side, the "you are my mate and I am going to eat everyone who dares touch you" are a lot more sexy than "woe me, I am a werewulf and don't deserve to be loved, especially not by Hermione".
I hope you have more stories planned/written? While you have my complete gratitude for submitting a complete Remus/Hermione story today, I will need something to read tomorrow too...:-)))
person smmz79
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice... well i am glad he is finally over all of that i am sorry bull crap!!!! way to go hermione.... great chap SG