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Damn this is the last new story so I guess I have to go study for finals after this...booo...Anyway, nice update...of course Draco is going to have a bitch fit when he finds out that Hermione is Blaise's cousin...One quick question: I know that the Blaise Zabini in the books is black, is yours black or are we making it AU?

Hello again. I am really glad my reviews have helped you. :-) I really do think this story is off to a good start. And, no worries about it feeling like a slow start. Some of the best stories out there needed the buildup to have the biggest bang in the end. I look forward to seeing Draco's reaction to her though. I have a feeling he's going to make Ron's reaction look mild. lol And, I am dying to know what else is in that law. Good tease! Thank you and I look forward to more really soon! HG4eva

I like it!!! Keep going!!!!

Can't wait to see what happens! update soon please.

I really like the beginning. Hurry with chapter 3! ;)

Soooo you totally threw me for a loop! I thought they were going to be lovers...BOOOO but I am still very interested to see where you're going to take this story...I'm just glad that Blaise is involved in the first place, gotta love that kid, let's see what you're working with

Cousin! What? I did not expect this. I am a little shocked right now and I do not think I can produce a productive or insightful review. I have to remind myself that this is a D/H fic. Anyway, do not get bent out of shape about the spelling errors, there were only a few and I was just trying to think of something constructive to write since I, personally, thrive on that type of feedback. Thanks for the quick update that is awesome. I get so wrapped up in these stories and to have a new chapter the next day is great. Thanks again and keep up the excellent work.

P.S. I remember you saying this is your first story so I was wondering if you wanted reviews after each chapter, you know to help keep you going, or if you would prefer a more detailed review once you are finished to do any editing to the final product?

what?! crazyness
hope u update soon

beautiful!

Hello. I think it's definitely got potential. You have talent as a writer in that you know how to set up the story, add some suspense, and introduce the characters. I liked the mix of explanation and dialogue. Yes, there were some spelling mistakes and a Blaise's last name, but overall I like it, so far. :-) I hope you do continue, as I would like to see where it goes. I'm thinking Hermione is a long-lost sister to Blaise and the Ministry of Magic has passed a pureblood marriage law which is going to affect him, Hermione, and as you posted here, Draco. :-) I hope to see more soon! Thank you and best of luck. I know putting a story out there is very scary and you get kudos from me for attempting it at all. Now, don't worry about the input you get, take it all with a grain of salt (good and bad), and write for yourself. The rest of us are just here to enjoy!

HG4eva