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for Not So Much

by SweetMalfoy

person Tenar10r
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Delightful story!
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so freagin' funny...his HAIR???? He's so vain and he doesn't know about Hermione so I wouldn't be surprised if Lucius does choose her because of her high social status as a war hero, being a Zabini (even if via cousin), smart, beautiful, doesn't care about materialistic things ... yeah, she's perfect.

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schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice so far. I loved Narcissa's parting shot to Lucius. Her sense of humor is on a par with my own.
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I am really glad you and the story are back. I am sorry you had a bad holiday, but I am happy for you that things are better. I look forward to the next chapter and them finally talking. :-) Thank you!
person moni
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please write more soon. Great plot, so far!
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Have a great holiday - your fans await your new chapter soon. If you need ideas, let us know. Stay safe.
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I really love it.

Ron is such a git. I love how Blaise takes up the protective "brother" stance. "If you want Hermione, you have to get through me" is probably his motto. So, will her being related cause a scandal? They have to let he ministry know so proposals can be managed throught he Zambini family no? I wonder what Slytherins will crawl out of the woodwork then? Yummy, Draco soon - is he Blaise's best friend in this or is Theo? I love those three. I would love Draco's POV on the first time he sees Hermione again since school (as I'm assuming they graduated right and he hasn't seen her since?). What will she look like to him?

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schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I think Blaise's last name is ZAMBINI - with an M. I think you're missing it. It's just an FYI for future chapters.
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this sounds interesting: could the ministry be imposting a marriage law? is Ginny Zambini's mystery girl? he mentioned family...surely not Hermione.
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME twist ... LOL! Hermione is related to Blaise! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT. Boy was I wrong. I should have seen it in the first chapter but mid-way through the second it became so clear - I thought it was sister at first but cousin is much more believable. LOVE IT - more please.