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for Harry Potter and Another Malfoy

by famlia

person Jayde Alyxandre
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw. That was so (bitter)sweet. But a happy ending. yay. I love it.
person trist
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a very and original idea and I can't wait to read where you will take it. The tableau you've set promises so many fun confrontations and potential for disaster that I can't help but rub my hands in glee, take the popcorn and lean back to "watch the fireworks"...from a safe distance. ;-)
Keep up the good work!
person Jan
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like this story... I can't wait for more :D

So, please update chapter 9 soon ^_^

Jan
person butterpie
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, Harry certainly isn't about to give in easily, and Scorpius is moving much too fast by attempting to force a relationship right now. Juggling two Malfoy men and Harry isn't even breaking a sweat about it. Man, Harry just knows that its insecurity and plain old jealousy that has the younger Malfoy acting like a petulant child. As the older individual in this scenario he's trying to keep things from escalating out of hand too quickly, so Scorpius needs to be willing to listen first if he wants to suceed in winning Harry's heart. I hope he proves up to the challenge for his and Harry's future happiness. Still an even a bigger issue up front is Draco, who is not willing to give up his possession of Harry to anyone much less his own son. This feels like a long presumed dead volcano getting ready to erupt in a volley of mixed emotions scorching everything in its path. Looking good so as always please continue to keep it coming because you make it so fine.
person Jayde Alyxandre
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehe. Already in bed together. I just love Scorpius. Another great chapter. Thanks for the update.
person alma
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry, there's no turning back now!
person Jayde Alyxandre
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh. How sweet! -starry eyes- He finally confessed! I love it. I don't think Harry will be able to say no after that kiss. heh. Another great chapter. Thanks so much for the update.
person mls1971
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great work!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay..they..sort of made up! How nice! I hope Harry changes his mind about whether he should have a relationship with Scorpious or not...They make such a lovely couple! Thanks so much for the quick update, I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I'm glad, Scorpius didn't beat around the bush..instead he came right out and said it..lol. Keep up the great work, I can't wait for your next chapter. 8D
person butterpie
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Scorpius has finally come to his senses and realized just how deeply he hurt Harry with his thoughtless and ruthless behavior. It would matter less coming from Draco who has never cared to show any positive type of emotion for Harry, but Scorpius really needs to remember the example of being considered a part of Harry's family where trust and love are freely given and not limited to conditions. I can see that this triangle is going to be an emotional journey of discovery, wonder, and ultimately much sought after love alongside lies, treachery, and deceit as Draco has never cared for another persons needs before satisfying his own first. Harry and Scorpius will face a hard battle from friends and family alike as they seek to share a love that has no definitions on what is right or wrong, but what is the best for themselves in order to live without regret. I can't wait to see what's next so please continue to entrall us all.