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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhh Sev is a kinky bastard. mwhahaha.
and I feel the strong urge to smash Remus' face against the stupid closet wall...
and I feel the strong urge to smash Remus' face against the stupid closet wall...
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
'...he couldn't fathom a less likely partner. Well, Harry Potter perhaps, but someone would have to be a seriously perverted deviant to even envision such a twisted pairing.'
Do I sense some subtle dislike and sarcasm here? lol
Do I sense some subtle dislike and sarcasm here? lol
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww that was dumb, bad luck. off to ch5...
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is it strange that I can understand the female part of the staff? mwhahaha
Even though I feel slightly sorry for Sev, it was as if Remus was only teasing him. not fair. anyway... off to chapter 3
Even though I feel slightly sorry for Sev, it was as if Remus was only teasing him. not fair. anyway... off to chapter 3
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is bloody brilliant. I only read the first chapter now (have to catch the train in a moment) and I absolutely loved it. Some parts made me laugh so hard. (like: "I hope my performance was
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw! I hate for this to end! It was so much fun to read! And I'd like to see Snape TRY and look Harry in the eye after this chapter. *snort*
Very nice! Shame there ain't no mo' but I like it!
Very nice! Shame there ain't no mo' but I like it!
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November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Niiiice! A good canon twist that has them working this out between them. I'm interested to see how the Shrieking Shack goes!
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November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapters 8 & 9)
I always like it in a story when Severus gets the chance to tell Remus how the Marauders made him feel, and when he doesn't blame Remus for it, realising that Remus himself did no actual harm to him. I also like it, however, when Remus realises that he should have been stronger in standing up to James and Sirius. That aside, I loved the episode in the broom closet, with Filch pounding at the door. At times your dialogue for Severus makes him a little bit OOC, but it's well written, hilariously funny dialogue nonetheless, so I'm not complaining. I'm really enjoying this story very much, and am looking forward to the next chapter to find out what Severus has in mind for Remus!
I always like it in a story when Severus gets the chance to tell Remus how the Marauders made him feel, and when he doesn't blame Remus for it, realising that Remus himself did no actual harm to him. I also like it, however, when Remus realises that he should have been stronger in standing up to James and Sirius. That aside, I loved the episode in the broom closet, with Filch pounding at the door. At times your dialogue for Severus makes him a little bit OOC, but it's well written, hilariously funny dialogue nonetheless, so I'm not complaining. I'm really enjoying this story very much, and am looking forward to the next chapter to find out what Severus has in mind for Remus!
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November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so wonderful!!! I can't believe you don't have more reviews. I love your characterization (is that a real word? hmm) and your humor is so wonderful. I can't wait to read more. Thank you for writing this.
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this Snape. I like how he's not so proper in his own head. "what with Dumbledore's inability to keep his pie-hole shut" *SNORT!*
And aside from that, it's a great little story!
*snickering giggle* Filch the sea captain! And "AvKedav" is great!
I must say, you've got a great writing style. It just flows beautifully... and makes me cackle! ;)
And aside from that, it's a great little story!
*snickering giggle* Filch the sea captain! And "AvKedav" is great!
I must say, you've got a great writing style. It just flows beautifully... and makes me cackle! ;)