rate_review Reviews

I enjoyed it, I just wish you had gone AU and let them be together ;) I would love more!

I find that you played Severus Snape Brilliantly. I was so in the mood to read something a bit different and I ended up finding something that had me laughing so hard that I cried.

Shazam! I'm a knickers wearing super hero! lol ( i know it's not completely right but yeah) A bit sad that it ended so well sad. But I have gained all kinds of knew and wonderful quotes! I'm still dying over some of the things that Snape said in his head. Seriously I loved it, it was spot on I couldn't believe it. Some parts were a little off but it seemed understandable to me.

Oh and you played the headmaster just as great! *sniff* I loved it. I might have to read the first few chapters over again just because. Anyway, it would be cool if you could do something was a bit AU and in the future where Remus tries to patch things up with Sev. I would but I suck. I just read Harry Potter fanfiction and come up with ideas in my head. ANYWAY...

Oh and nice bashing of the Snarry fandom, I personally like the pairing, but I totally cracked up when you had that line in there. Anyway, Was in love. Can't say enough good things about it.

The only thing that I felt should be worked on. You can never skip stretching and soap and water are not efficient enough lubricants for arse sex. So said my gay friend. ( I too used to think it'd be fine. but alas it isn't) Wells that's the only critique I have for you. Hope to see you write more!

Later!

Well I absolutely loved the story - it was brilliant 110%. . . but the ending was a let down for me, not because it was so angsty but because it was so abrupt I seriously thought there was more to come, I didn't even have a clue that was the end until your author's note. It was such a unqiue and emotional story, and so in depth too and detailed whilst being in character - just like I said, the ending was so sudden it was like a lead-on to another chapter. . .

Very good though!

I enjoyed that up untill the end. It disappointed me then again Im used to people writinghappy endings so I guess I just automanically was dissappointed that Snape would forget abou maybe(?) loving Lupin the second black shows up (I'm ablack fan as well but now I'm with Snape with that dementor's kiss comment.) I still love the story and but now I can't look at Stupid-dore (Not a big fan of his, if you can't tell) without thinking of thongs and naughty trysts with students and teachers. Thanks for the nightmares, lol. But still can I bribe you for a little sequeal. Just itsy bitsy one with Lupin forcing Snape to take him back? I can offer up anything but my soul, sadly its owned by alomst everyone else on the planet. ^_^

Just a tiny question: don't you like Draco? I mean it's glaringly obvious that you don't harbour positive sentiments for him in this story, but is it your usual attitude towards the blond or is it just for the story???

It's really quite interesting to read about Potter from that point of view for once.

do you really think that's an appropriate ending for this story? Don't think so. Not that I want a happy end or something, that's your choice to make, but don't you think it's a bit abrupt?

ch six:
OMFG
'Time...time..time..time..time..time..time

no no no oh and did I mention? NO! You can't be serious. I want them to be happy!!! sniff

dunno why, but I think shaving your man is one of the most erotic things one can do. roar.
and why does old-mouldy-shorts need to fuck it up?
You've a hang for cliffhangers, eh?