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schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, Luciis knows better than to draw on her, so I guess this should be extremely interesting! 'sniffing his desk' ROFLMAO!
person Fallen Star Forever
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!1 I think that you should continue!!!!! Or at least do another chapter with dinner!!!!
person GC
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVED it, it was hot hot hot hot and the ending was sweet. Haha I had fun imagining Lucius's reaction to his desk being used as a shag station...
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fucking awesome!
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooo! Nope. No!!! What happens when he wakes up Hermione??? You can't leave it like this - please - pretty please. Pretty please with Lucius (or Draco, or Snape) on top (or, on bottom).

Love Lucius' reaction...the thought of him sniffing the desk had me in hysterics.
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol that was great i love how he reacted .. later for now

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person kazfeist
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! Particularly the romantic bit at the end. :D
person KellyJCR
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You really are depraved but, only in the best possible way. I loved it and I learned a few things to. Well done!!!
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was insanely hot! And I loved every second of it. LOL!
person Gertie
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bloody fan-fucking-tastic! That was perfect. Straight porn agrees with you because that might be my new favorite.