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person kazfeist
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I agree with Dreamweaver. You're halfway to a happy ending. I mean, the wards didn't kill her as they Apparated, and he's already admitted he's over halfway in love with her. You just have to have her win over Narcissa with her Hermionely charms, and we're set for a big wedding, Apoplectic!Ron and all. :D
person Jaynie
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! I barely managed to save my computer from a shower. The conversation with Lucius was AMAZING! I loved it!
person kittycat30
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't catch my breath! The idea of Lucius sniffing the wet spot is beyond funny!!! Will we get to see Narcissa's reaction too? I hope so!
person German Lady
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Please write more chapters.
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!!!! I grinned and giggled my way straight through that. It was a perfect view of things from Lucius' perspective. Gracias, chica! HG4eva
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really good,deliciously awesome, can totally picture Lucius' face when he realizes (rofl) but I'm not sure how much of a good idea writing this is because now I want to read more. lol maybe possibly you could do another chapter? pretty please with sugar on top. love it btw, in case that didn't get across. okay, im shutting up now.
person shelagh
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks my curiosity was going to kill me.
person shelagh
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I almost forgot!!!!!!!! Please add in my vote for MORE!!!! Bit then I ALWAYS vote for more of your fics.
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
~*SG*~

I have to completely agree with the other reviewers, love!!! You have opened up a small can of plot worms here!!! Lucius and Hermione have to meet face to face, and Lucius must be ever so wicked and make statements regarding the scratch marks on his bedroom door, the spot on his blotter that caused him to buy a new one, and lets not forget what he witnessed outside...he'll have to have the caretaker completely redesign the landscape....LOL. I'd love to see Hermione's reaction to all this, and perhaps wearing one of your wicked sayings t-shirts...something Draco has charmed to read "My boyfriend's wand is bigger than yours" LMAO...

Please add more!!! And make my vote count twice!!!!

Love and Hugs...

Lady B*
person Gertie
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I have a smile permanently stuck on my face. That was just icing on and already perfect cake. The idea of Lucius with a very confused look on his face, sniffing his blotter. I was shaking from suppressed laughter, as my poor husband was in the room and always asks for an explanation when I bust out laughing.