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person sweettiff_14
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story!

This first chapter was so fun and hot, but seriously, the second one had me laughing! I love Lucius and I can totally understand Draco's desire to shag on his desk.

Hermione is a lucky girl!

Loved it!
person SynneR
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao
i love it, the first part was really, wow. lol but the whole lucius draco convo was hilarious i loved it! lol
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was brilliant, and I recced it over at LiveJournal's The New Library! Excellent work!
person alle
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it!
would love to know what hermione thought of the whole thing!
brilliant!
person Muffy
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hee! I think I remember that song...from The Last Boy Scout? Brilliant!
person Utopia
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that's cheered me up! I wish they bottled stuff like that to make people better - it made me forget I had a cold while I was reading it! My nose even stopped running! lol.

Alright... for your notebook... I want Lucius to not be sleeping quite like the dead - and perhaps their antics being written from HIS point of view. Even if its just a drabble!
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!! That was fabulous!!

Thanks for a little "morning after" scene!! Glad i could inspire with my ramblings!!

Can't wait for the next story in the works!!!

Much love as always!!!


Lady B*
person KellyJCR
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Priceless! Oh to be a fly on the wall when Hermione and Lucius came face to face. LOL! Well done!!!
person Anon
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wha-at???? NOoooooooooooo, you can't leave it like that! Forgive the ramblings of a half sloshed woman (I blame the neighbour as always) but you just can't leave it there. You've made yourself a story, goshdarnit!!! I want the happy ending!! (Okay maybe more than half sloshed). LOL That was delish, can I help it if I want another helping????
person kazfeist
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The. Second. Chapter. Was. Priceless! :D