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person emo44
schedule November 10, 2023 at 12:00 AM

I loved that song. Totally forgot about it till I read this. Such a fun night for Draco and Hermione. I think I need one. lmao

person emo44
schedule November 10, 2023 at 12:00 AM

God, that was fricken hilarious. Lucius, seeing the poolside show, hearing them at his door, the scratch in the door "investigating" his blotter, hearing them. I had tears streaming down my face. Oh and best of all Draco revealing to Lucius it was/is Hermione Granger.  God I wish you wrote more of this story. Hell, I don't even know if you'll see this review. Thank you for sharing your imagination. Bravo!

schedule September 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Jealous!! I want a man like that!!

person fdavis
schedule September 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was so sexy and hot to read. Thank you! And don't ever apologize for helping so many people to get off. You're like a missionary worker. lol MORE MORE MOR!
person centava
schedule August 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Fantastically hot story!
person Centava
schedule August 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic PWP. Some of the positions were a bit too similar to count as separate ones, but who cares, it was HOT! But I kept wondering if they'd end with one you didn't use--him sitting upright with basically their legs wrapped around each other. Not the easiest position, but that criterion didn't stop some of your others.

Hot story and I hope to read more of your work!
schedule June 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lmao oh this was priceless... I love stories that are hot and serious as well as being funny and hot...
person Jazupyourlife
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg soo hot.. I've read this before and i still can't get over the fact that its super hot! Are u making a sequel to this? I'm going to really look forward to it..
person Trelweny
schedule July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Only three-quarters? O_o

Brilliant! Absolutely BRILLIANT! Wonderful job on all the positions. Loved Lucius' reaction to everything the next day. I'd love to know Narcissa's thoughts... but I imagine her too cultured to Talk about it. At least not until the youngsters' wedding day. ;) Then I could see her teasing her soon-to-be daughter-in-law.

Thanks so much for writing!
person Alice
schedule June 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lucius's reaction was priceless! I totally imagined it in my head after Draco was done listing all the places he took Hermione XD

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