rate_review Reviews

omg omg omg SEX!
and ohhh how beautifully written it was!
and the whole Ron thing ..whoa...so powerfully written
i'm very in love with this story great job =)

Freaking bravo! You really put some more awesome spice in that sex scene and added that little extra kick to Ron can't wait to see more! Seriously that was awesome!

aww this story is AWESOME!!! ooh boy marker mustache... haha that stuff don't come off!!!!
absoultely brilliant!!! great job!!!!

aww this story is AWESOME!!! ooh boy marker mustache... haha that stuff don't come off!!!!
absoultely brilliant!!! great job!!!!

Very very very AWESOME chapter!!!! DG, right from "you ever even think of her again, I will end you", to "I love you..." fabulous!!

o0o wow... what an awesome chapter.
fucking Ron, I hate that bastard, ugh if he was real i would hurt him soo bad, and I wouldn't need magic to do that.
on a great note, they finally professed their feelings for eachother, wow that was awesome!!!
cannot wait to read more!!!

What the heck are you apologizing for?! That was perfect. It was touching, sweet, awful, hurtful, action-packed, fast-paced, and lovely. Yes, there was angst, but their love more than made up for it. I want to enter the story to smack Ron around, but other than that it was just right! No apologies, just keep writing. lol Thanks, HG4eva

I just love this story. It makes perfect, happy, reading. An angsty story is good, but sometimes I need a well-written, lovely, love story like this one. Thank you so very much! HG4eva

I love this story. Its one of the better Draco/Hermionie fics that I've read. I love the passion between them and I really like the set up of the story. I only have a couple of complaints and its mainly just a matter of personal preference I think. The mushiness of the last chapter was just a llliitttllleee too much for me lol. And I thought that harry and ginny were too welcoming of draco. I thought there should have been a little bit of hesitation, idk that's just me lol. I'm not usually into fluffy stuff. The only other thing that bothers me a little is that you use the word 'gods' a lot. Its a bit repetative to me. Its not a big deal though, please don't get mad lol I'm just being honest. You really are writing a great story here and I can't wait to read the next chapter!! :)

I almost stopped reading it because I thought it would be really cheesy, but I cannot stop reading it! I think it is because you set up the scenario well. The fact that Draco disappears for a few years makes me suspend any disbelief I would have of his nice guy routine. I can rationalize things he could have done while he locked himself away. A lot of self discovery I imagine. I might go back to other stories I thought would be cheesy and give them a chance.