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for Unknown Chemistry (Complete)

by dragonsgirl

person Adriana
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that position is gonna become sacred!!! Lol can't wait to read that scene haha
Good job with this chapter, I think you really got Hermione's turmoil across...It was very well written =)
Thanks for the update!
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY for protectiveDraco!!! You know you're in love when, you take a few hits from your girl and you *still* ask her if she's doing better!! DG, that must've been a very tough chapter to write, I'm thinking second in only to, the near-rape scene, or was it worse?? I don't know. Still good, and I wasn't sure if you were gonna have Frensen side with Ron. Good chapter all in all, and hon, yes, these kinds of stories *always* keep me hooked!!
person gabby1234
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel like i can literally see this scene in my head the one with hermione and draco meeting the Auror's it was described really really good! And I like the elaboration on the back story to Ron about him being a fa mily pariah,it's really exploring the characters in a very detailed fashion. I mean Harry would be angry even if it was Ron and the Weasly's standing by hermione put a smile on my face, especially when they were willing to send Ron in after the birthday fisco, not many families are that objective, so I think it's refreshing they are so clear headed and just in this story. Molly Weasly is known for looking after her own and after loosing George you think she'd be even harder on these thing's but I take it she's doing this for Ron's own good,there's so many dimensions to this story that it makes it 100% refreshing, I totally dig this story; and I can't wait to see more!
person kazfeist
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure if I've reviewed before, but I love this story, and how affectionate Draco is towards Hermione. Thanks for keeping Severus alive, too. Keep up the good work. :D
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DG, you really know how to pack a punch. That was an incredible chapter!! Morning-shower sex... delish, and with a God like Draco... *yeah* I wouldn't mind that either. I really like how you paint Severus, as well, he seems to be really likeable, which is something I really like. Loved the class scene, too *funny*!! I couldn't stop laughing!! Finally with the bombshell.... well, all I have to say is, I can't *wait* to see how you work that one!! Awesome chapter DG!!
person Adriana
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow this is becoming very serious and dramatic i love it!
great shower scene too! hehehe
person Adriana
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
and oh I nearly forgot the class comedy lol love Draco's seriousness concerning the oldest stone in the building...
person gabby1234
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
tricky tricky twisty plot that is really unexpected, I mean not really it's what should happen, I love the fact that Harry and Mr. Weasly did the right thing even though it was Ron! Usually family members and best friends can be not so great about that stuff. I really like the subtle healthy way Draco's rubbing off on Hermione ;and that shower scene was totally awesome an freaking hot!,I can't wait to read more!
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Hermione. And, poor Draco. He's being such a rock. And, she's about to completely fall apart. I know I said it before, but I love your Snape. The best part of this chapter was that through all the fun and love, I could feel the tension building. Fantastic writing! Thanks again, HG4eva
person radness.
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i'm so in love with this story. i look forward to the updates and i check for one everyday.
the intensity of the emotions you portray are astounding, and moving, and heartbreaking and heartfelt all at once.

please update it again soon.

its wonderfull.