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for Unknown Chemistry (Complete)

by dragonsgirl

person gabbynatty1234
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a very awesome unique present from draco totally loving the sexed up sex of this chapter I cant wait to see the next chapters! Also man how awesome was the ipod gift that sounds like what Hermione would do and I could so see draco getting into electronics even though hes a wizard. I should say I've never had a problem with molly but she's never been my favorite either, where she gives hermione the smallest Easter egg in the fourth book to Hermione because of Rita skeeter; I was like uh uh oh no you didn't. How sweet for dramione though there frist Christmas! I love it!
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww this story is AWESOME!!! i love reading it and i look foreward to a new chapter each time.. keep up the great work!
person alina290
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good Christmas for me. I had not noticed that you had updated before the Holidays. Thank you so much. Keep up the good work.
Liz
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DG, girl that *rocked*!!! Man you sure know how to put out the smut.... I loved how Draco got the iphone!! I have not succumbed to even an iPod myself... yeah, I know old school, but whatever!! Good chapter DG!!
person Anon
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bloody hell!! Where was I when this was going on? 20 Chapters! Yeesh, have I got some catching up to do. It will take a little while as I'm going to be away for a couple of weeks but I shall be reading. :)

Anyway, yay for Hermione getting her apprenticeship with Snape - the lucky girl. I'd be too busy drooling to do any work if it were me. LOL And bah, Ron was a git which makes way for Ron being a really big git in the future huh?? Excellent! I love Ron, don't get me wrong but I like when he gets his foot stuck in his mouth too and I think he shall. :)

Oh and of course Draco will be working with Snapey too - must not be jealous of fictional characters!! LOL Pity his parents were't more excited - they're going to regret that.

LMAO on Harry and Ginny 'Trying for a girl, not that they didn't try all the time' line. Mind you with twins, I'd think they'd be too bloody exhausted. And well you go, girl, getting that worked up over a little fantasy never hurt anyone. LOL Apparently it works for Draco too. heh heh!!

Ah to see their faces when they realised the other was there too. And what was Draco up to when he's supposed to have been off the radar for so long?? And the entrance only works on first years huh - it could work on me. LOL Well three down, several chapters to go. Until next time. :)



person Adriana
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You write THE BEST sex scenes!! omg haha
it's a little hot in here...some of us need to o cool down...
Great chapter! I really liked the present! Photos are my thing, and its true that the best ones are the ones that are taken spontaneously =)
Nice work hun!
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU!! That was the sweetest (most hot) loving two weeks of Christmas! The meeting with her parents was fantastic, and I loved the girl time, too. And, my Christmas gift...mmmm, perfect! His desire to please her is about the sexiest thing I could imagine. And, their love for each other makes the sex even better. Last, I loved her gift to him. I laughed out loud when she explained it. Utter perfection. And, his to her was simply beautiful. Thank you for quite the most lovely gift. Hugs and Merry Christmas to you and yours, HG4eva
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
person Yokubou
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice balance of fun and cuteness :)
person gabby1234
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"like a dead fish"; "but with more paper cuts" what whitty and creative commentary; that's what hermione would really sound like and draco if they were having a conversation, and I love that!