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for Unknown Chemistry (Complete)

by dragonsgirl

person kazfeist
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely date between the two of them. I think he'd love a trip into Muggle London, don't you? Maybe to the Eye, and then a ride on the Thames afterwards, with tea at St. Katherine's Wharf. :D
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is really good, i can't wait to read more of it :)
person gabby1234
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
draco stops the sex eh? that is crazy! But I love this sweet dramione fluff, i think your doing a great job in the sex stuff, plenty of foreplay I'm sure when they do it it'll be fireworks! I like how the malfoys are believable, I mean it only makes sense that they would leave London and that the death eaters would all but almost destroy them so i really liked the way you captured it. Also last time i said that I've seen a lot of revolving plot bunnies but i should mention those bunnies can also be awesome classics. hope i didn't offend anyone,pretty sure i didn't. I really look forward to the next chapter! Hope to see you update soon.
person Adriana
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot chapter! Gotta say I like the fast seduction, but you could write whatever you wanted and I would like it haha
Excellent can't wait for the next chapter!
person gabby1234
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it is always refreshing to see draco and hermione like this,i.e.; post hogwarts but happy. usually i see arranged marriages or workings at the ministry this is really fun and original! I've read so much dramoine, to much to even remember all of it but this seems really refreshing and original to me. And so all these original stories are always the best; if your ever up for a dramione award you can count on my vote!
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
both. hahahaahaha i loved it!
person kroger57
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I just wanted to tell you that I love this story :) Hurry and update (I wanna see what happens next!)
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet. I can understand Hermione bein gupset, its weird to have these intense feelings of attraction towards someone when a few short years she had intense feelings of dislike for him. It certainly has thrown her for a loop.

And Draco, he so much wants to be accepted for who he is now and not who he was in school. I;m glad Hermione is trying to do that!

I'm looking forward to the date and whatever else is next!! =) Keep up the good work!

Lady B*
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello there! First, thank you for updating regularly. I am really enjoying this story. The last chapter was an explosion of passion; this one an explosion of feeling. I am loving this story. Please update again soon. Thank you, HG4eva
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ive never been so excited for a date! more please!