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for If I ever leave this world alive

by mlefay

person Kathy
schedule March 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
That's it? Please finish. I like the concept.
person Trelweny
schedule May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting premise. I'm sorry to see this story neglected. I would have loved to see how "new Albus" intended to get "new Severus" and "new Hermione" together.

Thanks for writing.
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, but I want more. More, I tell you!

I like how things have mostly remained the same, but with minor differences. Thanks for sharing, and do you send update emails? If so, I would love to know when you do update.

my email is: tambrathegreat@gmail.com
person Carine
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
ok,you only got me more confused and drawn to your story.But I won't ask any more questions,because I do not want you to reveal too much.I will simply read on and see where this story will lead too....Oh! and certainly review....
person Carine
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah,
now I understand.I knew that this story was about incarnation,but thought that Severus was in a sort of heaven and would be "sent back to earth" after some kind of intermezzo in heaven.
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, this is more of a 'Hogwarts Redux' than a true reincarnation, then? From your notes in ch.3, it would seem that instead of a true rebirth, both have been sent to an alternate timeline, earlier in Snape's lifeline and later in Hermione's. Or am I completely blowing smoke, here?
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person anncee
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this one sounds very intriguing, can't wait for more!
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a great start ..please please update soon .. later for now

angel
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...interesting premise. Moving on to the next life. A euphemism for the after-life or reincarnation? There are a few different ways you could run with this. I am very intrigued.

Looking forward to your next update!
MHS