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by GammaOrionis

schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh you know me so well! I tend to skip over your responses to the reviewers, only reading what's a response to my review. Sometimes I go back to read the rest after I read the chapter but to tell the truth... That's rare, since I don't read the original reviews beforehand.

Hah, so she finally comes to her senses. Good for her! Although, as I said before, I think it is partly the guys fault (Lucius as well as Harry and Ron) for not telling her the implications of the Dornr
person VoraciousReader
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank gods! Finally! I thought Lucius would have to storm the wedding or something. Though, that would be a good scene, too, come to think of it...never mind. Loved the matching patroni mer-horses, too.
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. I am glad that Hermione finally did the right thing. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I hope that Hermione and Lucius get married soon so that Ron can't try to get her back.
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, she's a little pushover there! I mean okay, she's sick, but to agree to what makes you sick? I can't say that I understand her at the moment.

And Lucius is wicked, isn't he? Making her faint... Really. But the necklace... Nice twist that there is a counterpart to it and that he can use it to spy on her!

Only thing I have to criticise on this chapter: It's TOO SHORT! I want more!
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just love the slytherin plotting! Lucius is just so delishious!
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update the other Only Time Version as well. As for this one: well Lucius said it all didn't he in his little speech:
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahaha i loved the part were Lucius said he had a woman to reclaim ;)

go Lucius :D :D :D lol

nice chapter :O wonder if hermione will realize soon that Ron isnt for her mm anyway :D loved it! n yeah the wait was shorter lol :D

update soon! :D
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Go Lucius!!!!! He needs to get her back! Ron doesn't deserve her! And Lucius can cry if he wants to...he just needs to get her back....
person morgana
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the Princess Bride reference lol.
person VoraciousReader
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ron is really a complete idiot. And Lucius had better get on the stick and get moving before she figures out what's going on in spite of his vaunted scheming. This was a good setup, can't wait for the next one. Take care of yourself.