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for Only Time

by GammaOrionis

person AlyBalyBonTaly
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I also understand you're in pain with your hands, just take your time, we all understand.
person Ashley
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear about your hand. I was just diagnosed with having what I call retarded blood cells. they explode in my body for no reason and cause my muscle to spasm...so far I've had them in my right thigh and right lung...I just worry if it will occur in my head or heart :-(

As for the story....LOVE THE DETAILS! and yes I almost cried as you give the IDEA that Hermione dies but at the same time not quite. You're a great writer chica and I hope you get better soon. Do you know what you have?
person andarte
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lucius isn't Lucius without at least a little insanity going. Awww... Hermione is the sweet one this chapter. lol
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was great. It was sad that Tonks got killed, but at least Hermione didn't. I do hope that she will be alright, though. I can't wait for the next one.
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful sequel so far xxxxxxx 10/10
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay... How exactly is Lucius going to bring her back from this? (I'm not saying he (or someone) won't...we all know he's awesome enough to do it ^_^). I'm just curious, that's all. I'm very anxious to find out how this little "problem" shall be solved...*ponders*
person maddie50
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, you have been busy. So you are writing two scenarios for the sequel. I can understand how Lucius would think that Hermione was killed by his father. So this is the good guy story. I am hooked. I love Enya, especially that song.
person Linneh
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its a pity your chapters are so short ! :(
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i already read the other story i just havent commented on it :D lol

at first i was eh? did she make a mistake but no :D my bad

im enjoying both stories, so plz keep us udpated :D
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please udpate soon.