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I can't decide which Lucius version I like more. Well, make that am most intrigued by. Bastard Lucius, or Besotted Lucius. (I couldn't bring myself to call him Benign Lucius, It's just not in him, even when he is on the side of light.) I am enjoying your story continuations more and more with each chapter. I'm just happy that Harry and Ron got to observed, albeit angrily, Lucius and Hermione together while she was unconscious. It would have been a rather sticky situation if she had been awake for all this. In some circumstances it is easier to yell at your friend. Especially when you already have low expectaions of your opponent. I delighted in Lucius' inner monologue about That's short comings. (And eww, I don't even want to visualize that pun.) Thank you for this enjoyable entertainment.

~Mia~

WAY TO GO LUCIUS!!! It is about time someone muzzled Ron.. I have wanted to do it for years..LOL... I really like the sequels it is funny I thought that I would like this one more as it is lighter, but I have to say that I like them equally..Good job and I hope all is well with your hands.

Very nice! :) I'm really looking forward to your updates haha, i check on daily basis! Your plotbunnies are wonderful! I like the dark Lucius as well! I'm still not sure which I like best haha,. goodluck with your hand :)

Oh oh, what happened there? Tell me, tell me, tell me!!!! Arrgh... Oh and how will she explain Ron when she leaves him? I mean it's only a matter of time, isn't it?

OMG! :O

nununu, damn that bellatrix :l

love it !

Good job thus far...which version is this? I'm on pain meds, too, so can't tell :) I just picked one. HOpe you're doing better and can't wait for more. I love Bellatrix, too...have a black and grey striped kitten I named after her. And man, is she a demon witch!!!

Eek. What a place to leave the end of the chapter. Hermione must have been hit with something other than the death spell. That is my theory. Poor Tonks, though. Bellatrix is a powerful bitch.

more please

Woow ;) I don't know which fic I like more, the light or the dark one. I say both of them have their appeal ! I'm so sorry about your hand, I hope you'll be better soon!

I really admire your work, and I find it great that you have been bitten by two plot bunnies that demand your attention. However I must say that both stories feel rushed, as if you're expelling them from your mind. Please take your time because shorter chapters make for lack of details, depth, and emotion.
Other than that, you're doing a good job on both stories. I'm very curious as to what will happen later on, but I will be patient enough to wait.