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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! I only started reading LMHG recently and came to AFF when I found the FF.net stories severely lacking. Since I assume most writers here are adults as opposed to 15 year olds, the quality of writing is much better.
So, you are officially my first review on AFF.net. Oh, and in my opinion, Lucius should have left Ron lipless. Harry was actually a reasonable creature though, something not often seen ships containing LMHG or SSHG. Is Hermione unconscious or does she have some sense of what is going on around her?
So, you are officially my first review on AFF.net. Oh, and in my opinion, Lucius should have left Ron lipless. Harry was actually a reasonable creature though, something not often seen ships containing LMHG or SSHG. Is Hermione unconscious or does she have some sense of what is going on around her?
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story as always. Maybe you can have Harry confront Malfoy's feelings...something like "a life debt doesn't make one do *insert something here*"...I dunno. Still love it though! Was great to find when I come back from a hard day in a class filled with people whose gerbil in there head has not only fallen off the wheel, but the wheel has fallen onto the gerbil and has been there for quite some time.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am quite comfortable in let's hate Ron land. He drives me round the twist. So, Narcissa is out of the way. We just need to figure out what Hermione is cursed with.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah it is no fun at all...i keep hobbling places like I am Mad eye or something! NO FUN! Hopefully they sort you out right. While I love your writings I do not think writing should be physically painful. I'd rather have you well than enjoy your stories no matter how much I look forward to them throughout the day. Class....great way to pass by time until the doctors office opens!
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahah evil lucius shutting ron :D lol
woah cool :P im curious to know what spell did bellatrix wanted to hit Lucius with :O
udpate soon! =D
woah cool :P im curious to know what spell did bellatrix wanted to hit Lucius with :O
udpate soon! =D
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved both versions of this fic...but this one is better..only slightly xxxx cannot wait for chapter 5s.
10/10
Jessie
10/10
Jessie
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Ron got exactly what he deserved. Hermione needs help and he was acting like a spoilt child. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Worse than death, hmm? Drained magic? Loss of intelligence? Since it was for Lucius, pattern baldness? Spots? Nightmare-riddled coma? Sterility, or ugly children? Aww, c'mon tell us!
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Severus! Oh I'm so glad you didn't keep him dead! I was so curious about what his reaction to seeing Hermione come into his class room would've been. Still am as a matter of fact. Anyway, this is a wonderful start to this sequel, I'm looking forward to reading more of it.
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story and the one before it is radastic. I mean the whole Merlin and Lady of the Lake thing is wicked awesome!!! Anyhoo...I love LM/HG they are the best..well one of the best. Tell me what happens to Mione. Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee