AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Only Time

by GammaOrionis

schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww :D drunk lucius is sooo cool :D hahaha :P

love it! :D

srry about ur messy apartment :S or roomate :S yuck
person Byrony
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW Poor Lucius.. I hope that Hermione wakes soon. Another great chapter. I like how you put Dobby's mother as the house elf who raised Lucius. Now about that roommate or yours. I could send a nasty hex her way if you would like.. I am not passive agressive at all. I am just plain evil.. ; )
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'll wait for it, but I'm pouting quite heavily, here. love how you have Harry being the voice of reason here, since his usual restraint is asleep in Lucius' bed at the moment! You'd think Ron would be a bit more analytical here, since he's in a major confrontation, but he doesn't seem to realize that. Again.
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mmm that ron and harry :P buggin lucius n acussing him of possible rape lol :P

love it :D
person andarte
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's certainly endearing how protective he is, and yet there is still that trace of the vengeful Lucius we all know and love.
person maddie50
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This version Hermione seems more affectionate toward Lucius. Ron is particularly obnoxious here. I loved him being hexed repeatedly. Harry seems to be a mature young man who is able to keep his head in stressful situations.
person HermioneMalfoyFan
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So
person Avanell
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWesome...now I'm getting both parts.
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you lately that I love this story? Both of them? lol Great update, I can't wait to see what happens when Hermione wakes up. Cause before she got cursed it certainly looked like she had forgiven Lucius and still cared for him immensely...
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work, and I hope that everything goes well at the dr.'s office. *raises soda can* here's to a speedy recovery for you, and to a top-notch author.
J.