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for Only Time

by GammaOrionis

schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Lucius is so sweet here! I want to hug him!

Ron is such a little git. He'll never get the finer points of manners.

Porper elves, lol loved them!

schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WE are your happy place, and we love you. 'Nuff said. Now tell your roomie the hands are bad and she needs to step up and take over the chores until you heal a bit, or she can pay for Merrymaids to come in all on her lonesome. And I love the elves!
person Avanell
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really, really awesome...I loved this chapter...LOVED IT!

Thought I was gonna DIE of lust thinking about drunk, naked (almost) Lucious crawling in my...her, Hermione's bed ;)

I'm a bad cleaner, too...but I think letting my roomie's daughter living there free AND not making her pay utilities (it's split by 2, not 3 people) makes up for that :) I may pay for 2 of the 3 bedrooms, but they have made the living room a somewhat bedroom for my roomie, since she gave up her bed (no, it's my mattress) to her daughter.
person maddie50
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Gawd, Lucius is a mess. However, he still loves Hermione, even after all these years. Throwing that in his wife's face during an argument is a low blow. But, he probably felt he was married to the wrong woman.
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like drunk Lucius. He's cute. lol Great update, I hope that Severus can find the cure!
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaawwww! That was actually pretty cute. In a semi-twisted sort of way. Update again soon.
person HermioneMalfoyFan
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh... Roommates. We all know them, love or hate them. Can't tell about my new one yet, she hasn't been around a lot this week. We'll see. I used to put my old roommates dirty dishes on her bed, she wasn't too pleased with it. But she cleaned them afterwards, so it worked! Maybe you should try something similar?

Lucius is a really nice drunk, isn't he. Get's even more soft and weepy with alcohol. Love that. I tend to be very - ah - affectionate, too when drunk. And he obviously had to tell her he loved her! Did she hear him? Maybe he will have a surprise when she finally wakes up?

Although I must say that I would have passed out after a whole bottle of whiskey! Okay, I am certainly a lightweight when it comes to drinking
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was great. I can't wait to read more.
person andarte
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw... its brutal leaving us there. lol