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for Only Time

by GammaOrionis

schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yei another update :D

mmmm insecure Lucius well that's quite understandable and a nice idea in general about the spell that bellatrix put upon hermione :)

update soon! =D
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He designed his protection spell to transfer all dark spells to himself? That's our Lucius--extreme! So he will have to kiss her awake; I can hardly wait. More whenever you're ready, I know we are!
person Citten
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well i am glad you had fun writing the chapter! i really enjoyed the chapter!! :) well i love the 'sleeping beauty spell' or so you made it seem. :) poor lucius he still thinks that he will loss her! foolish man! i really wonder though what it is of her future that she is see or wishing for? ;) i hope that you doctor appointment went well! i hope that you are going to be on the mend. until next time my dear!
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I was so excited to see an update! I love how you made the spell they think was used on Hermione the reason for fairy tales.
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this chapter. I hope you update soon.
person Ashley
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!! An update!!! I have been in and out of the city these past few weeks so it is great to finally be home only to find you have updated!!! great way to unwind!
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read the first story, and then I read this one, and I like it. I think it they really could have been one story put together, but eh, this way is fine too. You have an interesting concept here. I read that you said you never read any other time-turner stories before, right? I have, and some are better than others. I'm not usually a fan of them because when the main character gets back to the present, things are just...different. But that's expected. I am enjoying your story though. If you are curious and want to read a rather good one, its the only one besides yours that I really like, try this:
"Masters of Manipulation" -- TMR(LV)/HG
http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600015564

Okay, update soon :o)
person KraeHi
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have been entranced by the series and am looking forward to more. Please update soon!

~Anya
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.