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What?! Why? But...but...why? Lucius has to kiss Hermione. Gah! Get back here. I'm all flustered now. lol

Was worth the wait. GREAT job at dragging it out. i hate stories that go quick. Where they hate each other then within a chapter they change their mind and are married...SUCKS because that's not the way life is.

I'm still harboring love for my first true love. He is with someone else now due to distance between us but we both love one another...I date different people in order to try to forget or move on, but alas every dream I have is of him and not the person I am with at that time.

Sorry for the ramble. Just saying in a way I can understand Lucius not wanting to see that someone else is the person he loves soul mate.

oh he wont! :) the poor soul he would rather have her in eternal sleep then wake up and leave--poor fool, he really thinks that she will leave? but is there another reason? well time will tell. i love that draco is that percepitive of his father that he know how much it means lucius to now what to have the others kiss her. (boy that just can out really lame. sorry) i am looking forward what is next! :)

p.s. loved the expersion of 'bloodsucker' totally made me think of the twilight series! :)

Your stories are just awesome !!! I just don't know how you could end this last chapter like that !!!! Lucius needs to get over himself and just kiss her. Please update as soon as your able. Until you do this story will stay on my mind forever wondering what will happen !!!!

Please try Lucius xxxx

I want her to wake up and be with him xxxx

Beautiful writing

Ron really is totally oblivious, isn't he? I hope you intended that to be as darkly funny as it was, although I felt very badly for poor Lucius having to go through such an emotionally painful experience. I can only imagine Hermione's disgust when she wakes up and finds out she's been kissed like a 'resesa-Annie' doll in a Red Cross class!

This was great. I think Lucius is scared that she won't wake up from his kiss. I do hope that he will kiss her soon. Then he will know the truth and they can be together. If she didn't love him, she wouldn't have gone to him and been hit with the spell in the first place. I can't wait to read more.

I realised that I completely forgot to review the last chapter! I am so sorry for that! I promis to be better, after all I have my new laptop now, so I can go online whenever I want!

You're really mean, you know that? You won't make her leave him, will you? Well, if you do, then I will expect some Sevi-Action. He would not let them separate - except he wants her for his own. But that doesn't fit their relationship in the first story so (I loved Severus in there! I really did!)... On the other hand, she's so much younger then him right now. But no, he wouldn't do that to his friend...

Hm, I must admit that since we already mailed about this chapter it's hard to write something new... But you did definitly a good job!

What I think might be interesting is to get a bit more backround information on that guy who was hit by the spell. He must be still alive - well - asleep, since he cannot die, right? Maybe there is a cure and they will find it as they try to wake up Hermione... Plus, I just realised that since the spell was created to kill the guy should be dead. Hermione was protected by the spell Lucius put on her first, so if that wasn't the case for the man, then it apparently affects men less than woman? I mean sleeping is better than dying after all. Well, okay, he appeares to be in agony, so maybe not... Hmm.

damnit woman, get back in that computer chair and write me another chapter! Haha, yes i love that saying, keep your women barefoot and pregnant.

So poor Mione is under a fairy tale like spell...evil Bella. I didn't know you knew German, or is it just that little bit. Anyways, if you do need any help in German, French, or Russian do let me know.

My dramione bunney is still waiting for your email...I think it is in love with you...uncanny.... lol and actually it has written a few pages of the next Dramione chapter...