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for Only Time

by GammaOrionis

schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I hope he wakes her up next chapter.
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I feel so bad! Once again I didn't review! That's the problem if you read something in a break between classes and want to go back to review later on... You just tend to forget!!! Sorry...

Draco is growing up! That's such a good sign. And who's the mysterious girl? (Euhm... I suppose it's a girl, right?) Hmm, I don't think that I missed some indications, so I will just have to wait.

It's a sign of great love to be ready to let somebody go if it's necessary. It means to put the other's needs over the own, and that is never easy. Especially when it includes heartbreak. Lucius is just sweet in this story. I just wonder how it will be when Hermione wakes up. You already hinted that it won't be easy afterwards, either... My humble guess is that Lucius will not dare show his feelings as openly as he does recently? Well, I will just have to wait!

Nice update, thanks a lot!
person Mia
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So beautiful. Perhaps the best chapter you have ever written here. Just heartwarming and human. I do have a query though... When are you going to let her wake up? You do plan on doing that at some point right? I think she'll love him right off in this one. But she just might be pissed off that he let her lie there in stasis for so long after all that trouble.

~Mia
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FLyff is wondering where you went. He wanted to know your secret for this story. He says he is offering to trade more secrets with you.

Aww, Lucius is so sweet. Really, really and angel! Does he come with wings?

He should just kiss her...or let Draco try...
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He needs to know, but for Lucius, I think that having such a serious doubt about the possibility of rejection is holding him in a sort of suspended animation. After all, Malfoys do not get rejected, do they. Unless he takes that chance, neither of them will ever know. She took the curse for him, for gods' sake, he should feel somewhat reassured about her feelings! C'Mon, put him out of his misery!
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My heart aches for Lucius. The poor darling. I volunteer to kiss him and make it all better. lol Great update, I certainly hope that he does it soon! The suspense is killing me.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh boo. This is the one I liked and she's not waking up.
You're killing me woman.
In the dark one, its like all depressing and she gives off the appereance that she doesn't love him, and in this one, where she does outrightly love him, she's in a coma.
Geeesh!

On two lighter notes:
Update soon!
And get well!!! :o)
person Ashley
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I once again LOVED the story! I do have to apologize as I know what you are going through. About two years ago I started to have "seizures" though they never gave me an MRI or a CT scan. There is no correlation between lights and the "seizures" and I remembered the whole thing, just had no control of my body, but they did do an EEG and found when I have them my brainwaves are all normal...which confused them like no other. I think it is said I have "abnormal muscle seizures with normal brainwaves"...gotta love HMO insurance!
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can almost hear Snape saying, "Oh, here, I'll do it, damn it!" and getting blasted into the hall! The visual of poor Draco being forced over her is hilarious, dear, don't stop now. How are you feeling? I hope the hands are better and the roomie is behaving?
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I look forward to reading more.