AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Only Time

by GammaOrionis

schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! I love this story.
person Citten
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a wonderful chapter! i loved it! :) and i love that draco was easedropping! so very slytherin. ;) so now that his son has put it to him that was maybe it will get through his thick skull! :) and he will try! :) welll i will know soon enough i supose. :)
person Ashley
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think we should have a secret club...only cool people who have seizures may join lol

Seriously though, this was a great chapter even though it was a monologue. You got into the mind of what occured in normal time through Lucius' POV rather than what is "commonly accepted"...is it bad that I was sitting here the whole time one trying not to cry but trying to "will" Draco to use the Imperio on him lol
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter. I hope that Lucius will listen to his son and kiss Hermione to wake her up. Then he will know if she loves him or not. I think that she does and will want to be with him forever. Patiently waiting for the next chapter.
person Apple
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow.... this chapter is really sweet... it makes my tooth ache... lol

well.. I really like this chapter. and I would also like it very much if Lucius will give her the Kiss already... :p

hehehe ^^
person Linneh
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! :) I like your story, but now I do think it's time for some more action ;)
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* i hope you get to feeling better while the crazies work on ya!
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very introspective chapter. Draco has found someone else? Who?!? Or am I just blanking on something already mentioned? Well, I think, or maybe only hope, that Lucius is getting close to caving and kissing her. And I have to admit, I really didn't miss the Two Stooges. Maybe Ron could be pecked to death by the albino peacocks?
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww this was like so sentimental :)

poor Lucius :) yiikes i keep saying that everytime lol :)

love it! and cant wait for the moment when Lucius finally wakes up Hermione, if he does ...... :D
person andarte
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. I can't believe you left us there! I mean I can, but I hate it. lol

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?